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Bleeding tears and crying blood.
Tears don't fall from my eyes.
That doesn't mean I don't cry.
I cry yes indeed I do.
I just cry a different way than you.
My wrist and a razor blade cry for me.
I feel better when the blood runs down my arm.
I mean no harm.
I don't let people see.
I bleed tears and cry blood.
Tears don't fall from my eyes.
That doesn't mean I don't cry.
I cry yes indeed I do.
I just cry a different way than you.
Tears don't fall from my eyes.
That doesn't mean I don't cry.
I cry yes indeed I do.
I just cry a different way than you.
My wrist and a razor blade cry for me.
I feel better when the blood runs down my arm.
I mean no harm.
I don't let people see.
I bleed tears and cry blood.
Tears don't fall from my eyes.
That doesn't mean I don't cry.
I cry yes indeed I do.
I just cry a different way than you.
I d do this. It's something that I thought of.
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The tittle is very clear and calls out the theme of this poem clearly. The artist expresses feelings that are truly his, and for that his poem gets flooded with a wave of feeling, that leaves it's marks through it. The poem is also well regulated in the different verses and their interconnection, which from end to beginning deliver a clear message.
As structurally, the rhyming scheme is slightly off, but the idea is simple and well translated into words that flow into this great poem, like tears from the wrists this poem describes...